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pic rember broom an cat 100% think fewr dfa/wings of insanity current looks much cooler
further along on pic
puttin matchure only cause undecided weaather or not there are chlothes on past gloves an boots if you could call feet things that right now no clear chlothes
further along on pic
puttin matchure only cause undecided weaather or not there are chlothes on past gloves an boots if you could call feet things that right now no clear chlothes
Image size
1536x2048px 672.82 KB
Make
OLYMPUS_IMAGING_CORP.
Model
X450,D535Z,C370Z
Shutter Speed
33333/1000000 second
Aperture
F/2.9
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
128
Date Taken
Jan 1, 2004, 12:00:02 AM
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Well, since you wanted an advanced critique...
1. Cutting the thing that she is sitting on makes the composition a bit unbalanced.
2. Her left ear is higher that the right one, and overall there is no symmetry in her face.
3. Her right elbow looks a bit uncorrect. It's either too high or it's just the line in the middle is wrong.
4. The yellow edge is too bold I think. It would look better if you would make it fade to the backround.
5. The background itself is coloured in random directions that makes it a bit messy.
I'm not saying that the picture is bad though. It has an idea and the stylization is good. Just keep practising.
1. Cutting the thing that she is sitting on makes the composition a bit unbalanced.
2. Her left ear is higher that the right one, and overall there is no symmetry in her face.
3. Her right elbow looks a bit uncorrect. It's either too high or it's just the line in the middle is wrong.
4. The yellow edge is too bold I think. It would look better if you would make it fade to the backround.
5. The background itself is coloured in random directions that makes it a bit messy.
I'm not saying that the picture is bad though. It has an idea and the stylization is good. Just keep practising.